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Bounce Test - PLZ CRITIQUE

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I simply can't make a good-looking bounce.:onfire:
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It would be nice if some of you will critique, some tips would be very useful...^^;
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

well this is my critque of the month

the emoticon is simply lovely and cute.the expression just fits right in.But one thing i have to say is that every time i see it jump up and down it doesnt much look like its jumping.Instead from my point of view its as it being pulled up and pushed down by gravity.

and the speed of the emote should be just bit bit more speedier to mkae it look more jumping effective.but everything else is just marvalous.
the animation 3D effects i love it.but keep on trying and you'll keep on improving and i hope that this critque would help in the future.

that is my review ^^